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[Wiggle]

Temat Jedzenie miesa jest nie dobre i nie sluzy naszemu zdrowiu. Argumenty za i przeciw.Potrzebuję na jutro. Dam 2000Usd za dobra pracę mogę dać do 3000USD.

[DeJviD1994]

Hmm, kuszące.

W jakiej jesteś klasie, żebym wiedział na jaki poziom to napisać ;D

[Wiggle]

Maturalna

[DestinY_]

Cześć, przygotowałem dla Ciebie pracę. Liczę na wynagrodzenie, jeżeli praca się spodoba. Pozdrawiam!

 

Spoiler

Hello, (TWOJE IMIE) there! I would like to present you some arguments about meat, what we eat very often. I like to eat meat, but not too much, just some amount of this.

 

First thing about the good parts - meat is very tasty for almost everyone of us, not included a part of vegetarians here. Almost everyone like to eat this type of food, so this one can be included as good part, because it is very popular! Meat is also healthy in some situations, but i can't say who's have problems with health, because meat is not harmless. Eating meat is for sure more healthy than chips, chocolate bars or other sweety candies, so this is why i prefer meat for you.

 

I should to write about good and bad things inside, so now i will tell you something from part of bad sides.

By eating a lot of meat is harmful, because it affects the weight and health. Every amount can be bad for us if someone don't really know how to stop eat this one. By the way, if you know how to eat healthy, you will not get any problems!

 

This is everything what i wanted to say about, my opinion is there.

[Wiggle]

Dejvid już się podjął ale za checi 500 dam

[Nyth]

Cześć, przygotowałem dla Ciebie pracę. Liczę na wynagrodzenie, jeżeli praca się spodoba. Pozdrawiam!

 

Spoiler

Hello, (TWOJE IMIE) there! I would like to present you some arguments about meat, what we eat very often. I like to eat meat, but not too much, just some amount of this.

 

First thing about the good parts - meat is very tasty for almost everyone of us, not included a part of vegetarians here. Almost everyone like to eat this type of food, so this one can be included as good part, because it is very popular! Meat is also healthy in some situations, but i can't say who's have problems with health, because meat is not harmless. Eating meat is for sure more healthy than chips, chocolate bars or other sweety candies, so this is why i prefer meat for you.

 

I should to write about good and bad things inside, so now i will tell you something from part of bad sides.

By eating a lot of meat is harmful, because it affects the weight and health. Every amount can be bad for us if someone don't really know how to stop eat this one. By the way, if you know how to eat healthy, you will not get any problems!

 

This is everything what i wanted to say about, my opinion is there.

Google Translate ? Naprawdę dużo błędów jak na tak krótki tekst. Głównie mieszanie czasów.

[DestinY_]

Google Translate ? Naprawdę dużo błędów jak na tak krótki tekst. Głównie mieszanie czasów.

 

15 minut roboty, translator tłumaczy tylko pojedyńcze słowa, nie zdania, dlatego nie ma sensu korzystać z niego. Wytłumaczysz mi jakie błędy?

[MrKondzio]

15 minut roboty, translator tłumaczy tylko pojedyńcze słowa, nie zdania, dlatego nie ma sensu korzystać z niego. Wytłumaczysz mi jakie błędy?

Nie znam się na rozprawkach po angielsku, lecz przeglądając twoją pracę powinna być okej, jakiś błąd na pewno wypatrzy sprawdzający pracę.