Dear Tony,
I heard that you twisted your ankle few months ago! I hope that everything is fine now!
You need to know, that I am on summer holidays on sports camp in the USA! It's taking place in town called Pine Valley in Washington State, near the Pacific! Everyday I'm playing and doing exercises like jogging or playing football and also I'm going on gym. Yesterday I spend whole evening on jogging park, that is nearby. I met a nice girl there. On this weekend I will swim in the ocean. Water and weather is great here, trust me. You should go come here too!
I have to go now. Boys are waiting for me on court.
Love,
XYZ
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Dear Tony,
I heard that you twisted your ankle few months ago! I hope that everything is fine now!
You need to know, that I am on summer holidays on sports camp in the USA! It's taking place in town called Pine Valley. Everyday I'm doing exercises like jogging or playing football and also I'm going on gym. Yesterday I spend whole evening on jogging park, that's nearby. On this weekend I will swim in the ocean. Water and weather is great here, trust me.
I have to go now. Boys are waiting for me.
Love,
XYZ
98 słów, zgodnie z tym co wiem liczy się od pierwszego przecinka po adresacie, do ostatniego po zwrocie kończącym.
Nie biorę odpowiedzialności za to czy dobrze czy źle to napisane jest, ale raczej dobrze. Tak by the way: w które jesteś klasie? Bo to wyszło na poziomie pocztówki trochę. Na maturze jest przedział w granicach 120-150.
Użytkownik Czerwcowy edytował ten post 05/12/2011 - 16:25